SONG

annawho

SONG
They say: songs make thirst
And water dries in the mouth
And fire flames the throat
They say: somebody sings and dies
And times goes
All the music notes bend like nameless floras
And let the time strip off their skin and carve bones
Hear, far away children play under trees
And apples fall
The last note to remember
And last wind quietly pass the field
Run, run to where
And who calls : I love you.
他们说：歌唱生成口渴
水在嘴边干枯
火在喉咙里燃烧
他们说：有人一边歌唱一边死亡
时光走过
所有的音符像无名的植物弯下腰
让时间剥去它们的肌肤和雕刻骨头
听见吗？远方孩子们在嬉戏
苹果落下
记住最后的音符
最后的微风静静穿过田野
奔跑，奔跑，去哪里
那儿有个声音呼喊：我爱你

七星宝剑

很好啊，叙述，意向，精神。

水云涧

超喜欢，两种文字。。。。

郦楹

重重~~~~大家在看~~推!

哑然

SONG IS A POWER,SONG IS A FIRE!

annawho

谢谢，希望将来能够写得更好。