If may(如果可以）

静雪

原帖由 赏诗 于 2012-11-18 09:38 发表


I don't think I've ever read such expressions like "If may".

Just how beautiful the way of expression, if possible。

赏诗

原帖由 静雪 于 2012-11-17 17:28 发表
If may
        If may, I hope that I always not once met you
        If may, I hope that the clear spatial memory is not thinking you
        If may, If really may
        I hoped that gets up in  ...

If you can I hope sunshine remember you
--- If you can, I hope sunshine can remember you

Please pay attention to the grammar rules.  Not meant to offend the author.   Good day. :-)

静雪

Please point out the rules of grammar.Thank you friend, hold!

静雪

大叔，我把您的版本移过来了，不会怪我吧，握一下哈！

白世纪

我支持赏诗诗友的说法
如果可以不能照字面翻成中式英文If may
If you can 才比较像英语语法习惯

静雪

原帖由 白世纪 于 2012-11-18 10:47 发表
我支持赏诗诗友的说法
如果可以不能照字面翻成中式英文If may
If you can 才比较像英语语法习惯

白老师好，您说的有道理，只是比较正规一些。而if  may  这样的表达也没有错，增强了很美的语感。第二个版本呢，您看没有，那里就是用的If you can！还有第三个版本，譬如：
If it is possible, I would like to be your friend of lifetime。 hold!

[ 本帖最后由 静雪 于 2012-11-18 11:55 编辑 ]

白世纪

原帖由 静雪 于 2012-11-18 11:54 发表


白老师好，您说的有道理，只是比较正规一些。而if  may  这样的表达也没有错，增强了很美的语感。第二个版本呢，您看没有，那里就是用的If you can！还有第三个版本，譬如：
If it is possible, I would like t ...

if may 有没有错，我真地不确定，但是好像没啥印象
而最常用的反而是If it is possible,
呵呵，算了，其实我英文半调子，还是不参与好，否则早晚闹笑话

静雪又展示了惊人的一面，原来还会英文呀，真是越来越喜欢静雪了

赏诗

原帖由 静雪 于 2012-11-18 11:54 发表


白老师好，您说的有道理，只是比较正规一些。而if  may  这样的表达也没有错，增强了很美的语感。第二个版本呢，您看没有，那里就是用的If you can！还有第三个版本，譬如：
If it is possible, I would like t ...

我聽讀英文無數，沒見過 If may 這種表達，語法上也不通。
You may say " If I may" , however, "I" can not be omitted, since "may" is an auxiliary verb.
When you say "if it is possible", it's perfectly fine to drop "it is", since "possible" is an adjective.

Anyway, just my two cents.

[ 本帖最后由 赏诗 于 2012-11-18 12:40 编辑 ]

赏诗

原帖由 静雪 于 2012-11-18 09:45 发表
Please point out the rules of grammar.Thank you friend, hold!

You might want to get yourself a textbook to study the grammar rules if you are a serious learner.  I'm too busy a person to point out the errors one by one.  My apology.  Wish you the best of luck!

[ 本帖最后由 赏诗 于 2012-11-18 12:49 编辑 ]

静雪

原帖由 赏诗 于 2012-11-18 12:39 发表


我聽讀英文無數，沒見過 If may 這種表達，語法上也不通。
You may say " If I may" , however, "I" can not be omitted, since "may" is an auxiliary verb.
When you say "if it is possible", it's perfec ...

The friend said yes, here is the language of the poem, can also be expressed in this way.Thank you my friend!

这里有阳光

原帖由 阿弥豆腐 于 2012-11-17 21:47 发表
给阳光的情诗

赏诗

原帖由 静雪 于 2012-11-18 12:48 发表


The friend said yes, here is the language of the poem, can also be expressed in this way.Thank you my friend!

The pleasure is mine.
I've translated many English poems, and I do know the language of poem.  The end of the discussion.

静雪

原帖由 赏诗 于 2012-11-18 12:43 发表


You might want to get yourself a textbook to study the grammar rules if you are a serious learner.  I'm too busy a person to point out the errors one by one.  My apology.  Wish you the best of luc ...

Well, I'm on the mastery of grammar is not too clear, especially american.I study at the University of east east have forgotten some of this poem, so the grammar may be some problems, sends out the requested, thank you for the blessings of friends!

静雪

原帖由 赏诗 于 2012-11-18 12:51 发表


The pleasure is mine.
I've translated many English poems, and I do know the language of poem.  The end of the discussion.

It's a privilege to know you, have the opportunity to learn from you can?Thank you!To send blessings!

静雪

原帖由 这里有阳光 于 2012-11-18 12:49 发表

可爱的大叔！